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SoundEagle’s Writing Guidelines

1 Choose simple words or expressions over complicated or convoluted ones. Be concise. Be parsimonious in the number of words used to narrate a given situation. Words are like diamonds: when set properly they sparkle beautifully; when overused they become tawdry and boring. Consider each word as a cost: fewer words, less cost.

Desirable or Preferable	Convoluted or Unnecessary
to rank/grade them	to grade/sort them by their relative importance/significance
an abrupt, large/voluminous torrent	a sudden outbreak of a very large torrent with voluminous flow
reduce mechanical overload and failure	enable reduction in mechanical overload and failure
starting a new activity	launching out into a new field of activity
exploring the new knowledge	journeying into the new sphere of knowledge
to persuade them more easily to persuade them with greater ease	to increase their degree of ease of being persuaded to increase the degree of ease of them…